Some powerful stuff here; I enjoy the concept and how you open it up from there and I love the duality of it all (the he and she aspects of it) and just so beautiful.

Gosh, I am so sorry for the absence of reviews, I really can't say why. So sorry, though! ^^;

~* Noelle

sorrow, sorrow

it's heartbreaking what war does to us all.

WOW, I love this! the rhymes don't seem forced at all, and you have a very steady beat. I love the situations you describe... the end is perfect. This rocks!

keep it up & write on,

-Em

Pretty good poem. The old love triangle caused by war. I suppose you could have used any war for the title.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~

So sad.. but I love the idea of this poem; it reminds me of what we are reading in school (a little)

"She shed no tears but slipped him her band,/A symbol of what only one would miss." beautiful.