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| Nigousan-Aoiro 2006-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseThank you for your review...After reading this I had a flash back/present to my friends and how different we are from one another and how much we complete who we are... In the strangest of way this poem makes me think alot to it is fablous in the way that it does...As for structure and grammar everything fits togther and comes to an end conclusively with no strings left untied for the reader to think about...Overall this is mucho awsome and I really enjoyed reading this in place of doing my spanish homework lol! |
| skywriter-x 2006-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseaw, that is totally cute and fluffly. and caroline is the coolest person ever!zo |
| crazy dog events 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseA very pleasant read. Is this non-fiction? Keep it up. -pictographic.love |