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| Shelbaybayz 2008-05-06 ch 20,  | abuseT.T I WANT A SEQUEL. James becomes the president, Lori and him have kids they're son becomes an agent and has to protect the daughter of the queen in england! omg >.>.. haha just a thought |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-05-06 ch 15, | abusethis may be so weird to ask, but...does loralai have to keep her legs hairy because shes undercover as a guy? cause u know that'd be so effed up if she walked in that ball with that pretty dress on lookin like she got some cat hair on her legs lol |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-05-06 ch 11, | abuseomg i live in maryland! and the same exact thing happened to me with the bra stand thing except it was the guy i liked and i was in the the dressing room with just a bra and my undies on, see what happened was i leaned over and i didn't know my door wasnt shut all the way so when i leaned i fell out of the room and hit the stand and it knocked over stands and shelves and the guy i liked was with his friends and one of his friends girlfriend, i didn't notice until i stood up and saw him cracking up with his friends... lmao |
| Shelbaybayz 2008-05-06 ch 4, | abuseIt seems kinda like the movie shes the man lol, i like it so imma keep reading it, i usually dont like stories on fiction press, but this one is intriging (howeva u spell it) me. lol |
| kerricarri 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abuseI was disappointed because the main character sounded ridiculously peppy when someone of her stature shouldn't be that fangirly. It bothered me, but I suppose her personality is where the 'humor' aspect comes into play. At least there's a slight twist to the usual fare of 'crossdressing girl at so-and-so academy' clicheness. |
| Tecna 2008-03-25 ch 20, | abuseI am so glad that I found this story, although it was finished last year and I hadn't ever seen it before, I am still glad that I searched for stories to read via summaries. This has got to be an amazing story, I loved every single chapter and your characters were all amazing, especially James and Loralai. Love the chemistry between them and the ending was brilliant. Thoroughly enjoyed and loved reading it. Tecna ;) |
| lost until now 2008-03-20 ch 20, | abuseTotally loved this story! It was hilarious haha. Keep writing! Great job! ;) |
| Cashaholic 2008-03-13 ch 20, | abusewow, that was a very enjoyable read. Yay! Love this story! x. Cashaholic |
| Lisa 2008-03-05 ch 20, anon. | abuseThis story is SO good! u shud write another one! =) I LOVE this story. Write a sequel or somthing its so good. This is on my top 5 list as #1! Ur such a good writer. |
| ItalianQT 2008-03-04 ch 20, | abuseAw! I'm happy that they got back together! Cute story! :-) |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-03-01 ch 15, | abuseanother amazing chapter. I love the cave thing and everything else too. =] i love all your twists in every chapter. great work |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-29 ch 11, | abuseanother amazing chapter. thanks =] |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-28 ch 7, | abusei love this story. thanks for posting |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-28 ch 6, | abuseHa! coffie boy is in on it too... FuN |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-28 ch 5, | abusepoor guy with coffie. that is sensitive. I like the coffie shop scene and this chapter a lot. very fun read. =] |