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| Lucid Nonsense 2007-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful. Sad, but not in a whiny way, and full of power. Good job. |
| crazy dog events 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseSad, but never reaching melodrama or outright angstyness. It tells you the facts- does so beautifully- and the level sadness is given the reader's own interpretation, I think. I very much like it. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseVery empowering, left me quite speechless. The clarity of voice is quite enticing, and loved the last stanza. |
| Exquisitely 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseHello there! Amazing poem as usual.(To go off-topic:I finally saw you real-life last Monday, at CAP. :D I really like your poetry in Eye Of The World!Heh yes I'm a CAP'o6 participant.) |
| Jezsh 2006-06-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, I love this so much. Your descriptions are just so refreshing, perfect and the unusual words make this seem truly your own. The line 'to be loved like an echo' is breathtaking. I wish I'd thought of it. It's so beautiful. |
| Kusje 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseMm, I can relate with this alot. And I love your type of writing, the format and everything! Its very unique.:) |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully well written and detailed. Excellent work. |
| Sorrowful Dreams 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abusedon't we all fear that? In fact, I'm beginning a story on a future world war. This is really good. great work on it ~Sorrow~ |
| Emmytastic gal 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG this is so incredible!! I love the ending a whole bunch, but your style in general is so pleasing. I also really liked the 1, 2, 3 thing. Very unique and equisite. WONDERFUL WORK! :) keep it up & write on, -Em |
| Pheobe Meryll 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuse"But silence can be horrifyingly intrusive." I like that line. Your poetry style is very unique, and I enjoyed it much. |
| On My Way Out 2006-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved the last two-three stanzas. Makes me feel at ease, and a little on edge, like something is going nicely, but you know it won't last forever"Love could never/have been a translator/between such transient allies" in love with that line :) |
| Aquafied 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseno soft and ugly palenessto justify the burglary,- the gentle creeping and tearing? ah, sometimes i have to hold my breath when i read your poetry. you are one of only poets that i read their poems a few times, because i want it to soak into my skin and stay with me. it leaves me with such a question, such an apprehension, tension waiting ot be released. and i cant put it into words what i think of this. brillance that jumbles me |
| love between the radio stat... 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseomg wow. this is an awesome poem. i really liked it. |