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| smile persephone 2006-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseI find this poem beautiful. It reminds me of Tim Burton's clay animation. The imagery and atmosphere is haunting, almost death-like. I love it. |
| windowless room 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseYour words painted a vivid scene. Great job--I loved the last line. It seemed quieter, like just waking from a dream, and I could feel the yearning in it. Oh, and the poem had a very nice shape. (Literally.) |
| NotJustAnotherVillain19 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem--great word choice, and I especially love the ending! Great work, hope to see more! |