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Reviews For: Delude

smile persephone
2006-06-26
ch 1,
abuseI find this poem beautiful. It reminds me of Tim Burton's clay animation. The imagery and atmosphere is haunting, almost death-like. I love it.
windowless room
2006-05-24
ch 1,
abuseYour words painted a vivid scene. Great job--I loved the last line. It seemed quieter, like just waking from a dream, and I could feel the yearning in it. Oh, and the poem had a very nice shape. (Literally.)
NotJustAnotherVillain19
2006-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI love this poem--great word choice, and I especially love the ending! Great work, hope to see more!
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