Sweet!

Wow...this is kinda funny in the sense my anthropology professor joked about this very possibility in one of her classes...to see it take form like this is quite amazing.

Great, reflective piece!

Kind of disturbing but I really liked it. I liked how it flowed, with the italics and the "life goes on". I loved the Pennsylvania Ave. thing. Good job!

Yola! it be Jen. The truth is scary. What's worse is that people all over the world are ignoring this issue.

Short yet sweet. Nice.

Weird. Pretty cool, and good for being written so fast. It would be interesting to take each section and elaborate on the life.

Maranwe Telrunya

Hye that was a great one shot story. I loved the way you approached it with the past and the presence. Keep up the good work =)

oh and if you have time, can you read my story that I'm just starting and review it please? thanks a lot. =D

The repetition of "this is the beginning, this is the past, this is the future" is a nice touch, as is the reference to the white house. I quite like it.

This is some depressing stuff...