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| Ethereal Oceans 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseYou are honestly one of the best poets ever, ** Emily whatever and Edgar Allan Poe and the rest of 'em. Why don't you write anymore? I haven't read one damn thing from you since GSA. That place has changed you so much. You used to write and post stuff all the time! ..And, no. I could care less if you are now a god-lover. Mostly, it's the way you've been acting that's been making everything tense between us. Too good for the atheists now? |
| diffident 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseA new twist on political poetry. Most political poetry is oh-so bland and usually has an air of complaint in it, but this brought it all to a new level. You pulled in beautiful, original metaphors and wrapped your dislike for our government in it. Excellent. |
| Bigfoot111 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI am bloody bad a writing reviews but I will try. This is very powerful and mirrors what I think about America's government at the moment. I'm Canadian though, so maybe it is not my place. But then again... |
| theCoffeeEnzyme 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot. It's been a while since I've written anything exceptionally political (not since the election, I'm afraid) but it certainly is refreshing to see something a little biting. I especially like the line "Dead eagles attacking the sky." |