 purplepants 2007-04-28 . chapter 1i really like this. it's an amazing generalization of teenagers which may not always be a good thing, but it works. nice, keep writing. |
 simpleplan13 2006-05-30 . chapter 1I love the title.. defiantely very teenageish.. well done |
 beti213 2006-05-21 . chapter 1teenagers are just "lucid cover-up"s aren't they? I love the depth to this-the contrast of glittery to flawed. good stuff. |
 X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 . chapter 1Very awesome write. |
 account not in use 2006-05-19 . chapter 199 cents for a cheap whore and cheaper bear.
beautiful. |
 poetic abortion 2006-05-16 . chapter 1It sounds cheap and pretty and teenage.
Jesus, it was lovely.
~* Noelle |
 a lonely september 2006-05-16 . chapter 1sounds toxic. well written, though. |
 ADSpencer 2006-05-16 . chapter 1A cheap delight haha...Okay, anyhow, great work! |
 Pink Sparrow 2006-05-16 . chapter 1wow... its short but I love the way its written. I've never tried white nail polish before... hmm... anyway. nice work! |
 burning in effigy 2006-05-15 . chapter 1Ohh.. I like this a lot. Reminds me of my friend, she uses white nail polish on the top half of her nail, and a different color on the bottom. Loved the last line :) |
 Aquafied 2006-05-15 . chapter 1teenagers, psh.
makes me smile. i adore white nail polish, someone told me that black looks ever so dirty, my best argument was "self expression"
but i think everyone is doing it because they think it looks "cool" |