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| purplepants 2007-04-28 ch 1,  | abusei really like this. it's an amazing generalization of teenagers which may not always be a good thing, but it works. nice, keep writing. |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseI love the title.. defiantely very teenageish.. well done |
| beti213 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseteenagers are just "lucid cover-up"s aren't they? I love the depth to this-the contrast of glittery to flawed. good stuff. |
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseVery awesome write. |
| account not in use 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuse99 cents for a cheap ** and cheaper bear. beautiful. |
| poetic abortion 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds cheap and pretty and teenage. Jesus, it was lovely. ~* Noelle |
| a lonely september 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abusesounds toxic. well written, though. |
| ADSpencer 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abuseA cheap delight haha...Okay, anyhow, great work! |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-05-16 ch 1, | abusewow... its short but I love the way its written. I've never tried white nail polish before... hmm... anyway. nice work! |
| burning in effigy 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseOhh.. I like this a lot. Reminds me of my friend, she uses white nail polish on the top half of her nail, and a different color on the bottom. Loved the last line :) |
| Aquafied 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseteenagers, psh. makes me smile. i adore white nail polish, someone told me that black looks ever so dirty, my best argument was "self expression" but i think everyone is doing it because they think it looks "cool" |