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| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseAW! This is so sad! ::cries and hugs:: The emotion is...well...very potent and the rhyme scheme, I feel, really adds to the sorrow of this piece. Lovely work. |
| CynicalValentine98 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseIntense... |
| KingdomRain 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusekind of like the control poem i wrote but i dont have the beating down in it ( i dont think) great poem and i love how you express yourself. all in all great poem. keep writing |
| Sing.it.like.you.mean.it 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusei can so relate to this... |
| the nonexistant 2006-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is really... sad... I don't really know what exactly to say...The email thing-Anytime. I'll help in any way I can. My teacher changed my life by helping me, probally saved it as well as changed, and I'm ready and willing to help anyone I can. Um, being called nice is kinda new to me... |
| O.r.i.g.i.n.a.l.isn't.My.st... 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuse...Wow, I could feel the emtion in this...This poem was kind of a merge of sadness and anger- well to me at least^^ And then at the end, it's like you had it, and you're ready for anything that comes your way- something like that ^^;;-...Anyway, good poem. (Strong beginning)... So much expectations, standards and yet when you reach it, it's STILL not good enough...Your poem expresses a lot, very meaningful, too. Touching poem, great job on this, bravo^^. |
| lion-of-judah 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abusehm...very interesting. Almost like abuse. well written. |
| helle xandria encaitarince 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abuseaww... i have those days too... |
| BearClaw 2006-05-15 ch 1, | abusewow. this is just like my mom! i can totally relate |