Allahu Akbar! This is an incredible description of what it must be to die. Or perhaps to be born...

Ok, Spanish takes FAR too long for me to work out so I give up, haha...

I love your description, as always, but I have to say I'm not entirely sure what this is about?

It's got a lot of colour and sound in this - grey and red and white, sirens screaming, 'liquid song' of the water...even feel, with the clammy cold and the rain on her face. THAT's what I love about your description. You use the senses to draw people in.

Your little message cracked me up. 'It's raining here' - so you go write a little depressing rainy fic, haha...

hello there, I recovered my password after all. I can't help admiring the way you create paintings through words.Well, this is quite a musical painting, if I make sense to you. I think I can see all those colours and can hear the sound of rain!