Wow... I hate hospitals... I just thought that should be put out there. This is really good... I hop putting it on my favs. lets you know how much I like it. Oh, and a shameless plug... I re-vamped Trapped in Utopia, please read and review. I'll be forever indebt to you.

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Nice use of imagery. Love the way you tie everything together at the end. Does it have 23 lines, too? I didn't count. That would be quite witty of you. Eh, either way it's a great piece of work.

With affection,CM

sweet!! what an interesting perspective, I mean..who would look at the AC in waiting room n think like this? that confined, exclusive experience gives the entire poem an unique, specific, yet intense spectrum, yeah we often think kool stuff when we r in some unstable situation...good job expressing it, but hey I hope u don't have to go to hospital for any reason any more, lol, peace+love

An interesting connection, and very well done at that..The repition was a good touch.