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Reviews For: Torn This Apart
My Hideing Place
2006-07-27
ch 1, 		abusei like it! noice job!

~keep writing
Moondog Dozier
2006-06-28
ch 1, 		abuseThis has a marvelously lyrical, song-like quality. The true emotion that runs through this makes it relatable to the reader, while the word placement brings out the sound to make this very audible. Good work.
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