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| Stiller-Nacht 2006-06-18 ch 4,   | HAHAHA nice. Very cool I'm glad you liked my story I hope to update soon. Thanks! |
| Lady Pen 2006-06-14 ch 4, | Three words: Absolutely freakin' brilliant. Need I say more? No, I didn't think so! But I am hooked. The plot is original and that is something very hard to find. Not to mention the fact that the chapters all have witty names. I really, really, really like this you. You'd best update soon or your gonna have somebody throwing...rubber gloves at you ;) Just joshing. Anwyho, I'm going to go know...but for sure keep up the great work!~Lady Pen |
| FFNeko 2006-06-10 ch 4, | Yay! Good chapter. Update it soon please!! ~FFNeko |
| FFNeko 2006-06-10 ch 3, | That was a surprise. That was funny though, ripping off her, I mean his, towel like that. How embaressing! ~FFNeko |
| yummiecreamy 2006-06-08 ch 4, | Great Story! Really love it! Kinda reminds me of Hana-Kimi... Anyway, keep up the good work! btw, thanks for reviewing my fic! |
| shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 ch 4, | Ah much longer..much better. Anyways this is getting good--developing more of a plot--needs more detail in some places but all in all..its good--I'm looking foward to an update...so I suggest you hurry it up! Yolie. |
| shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 ch 3, | Jez! wow I was expecting it but not quite that blunt! My dear you gotta make your chapters longer. CSNY? That deserves mentioning--howe--anyways I'm getting right on the next chapter. |
| shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 ch 2, | Ah memento mori! sweet latin. I'm liking this so far--that woman behind the desk is rather creepy. Ekkies. Anyways--cool beans..good job. |
| shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 ch 1, | hm cute--thats gotta suck--royally. |
| anonymous pickle eater 2006-06-07 ch 4, | puahahahahahahaawesome story! i lurve this!!cant wait to read the next chapter! plunkie |
| Melissa Norvell 2006-06-06 ch 4, | This is a grand story! Sorry I didn't review until now. I just updated Into the Void,so feel free to check it out. |
| Adakua 2006-06-03 ch 4, | another good long chapter, but it could use more details, anyway keep up the great work. Till next time. waterhealer |
| Adakua 2006-06-03 ch 3, | huh, I haven't been here awile. good capter so far. keep writing. Till next time waterhealer |
| Darket 2006-06-03 ch 4, | Good chapter. Can't really say goodnight over here, it's morning. So... Good morning! lol. Glad to see you updating with this one. This stroy is doing fairly well so far. So until we meet again... Peace, Love, Triangle! Darket |
| Chocolate Trifle 2006-06-02 ch 3, | Cool story, nice twist in the last chapter, and well written. :D |