I think it's going a little too fast. You could have spread the events out to be much longer.

Also, while I said I won't pick on you for it, that was before I knew Abie was actually going to have an allergic reaction. I think that might be a little too much - it's probably best to leave it at a serious case of sniffles.

Apart from that 'allergy' and 'psychological' don't go together, I think it's an interesting idea :) And I'll let it slip since I don't think you're going off accuracy.

It's a nice change from 'girl in boy boarding school'.

HAHAHA nice. Very cool I'm glad you liked my story I hope to update soon. Thanks!

Three words: Absolutely freakin' brilliant. Need I say more? No, I didn't think so! But I am hooked. The plot is original and that is something very hard to find. Not to mention the fact that the chapters all have witty names. I really, really, really like this you. You'd best update soon or your gonna have somebody throwing...rubber gloves at you ;) Just joshing. Anwyho, I'm going to go know...but for sure keep up the great work!~Lady Pen

Yay! Good chapter. Update it soon please!!

~FFNeko

That was a surprise. That was funny though, ripping off her, I mean his, towel like that. How embaressing!

~FFNeko

Great Story! Really love it! Kinda reminds me of Hana-Kimi...

Anyway, keep up the good work!

btw, thanks for reviewing my fic!

Ah much longer..much better. Anyways this is getting good--developing more of a plot--needs more detail in some places but all in all..its good--I'm looking foward to an update...so I suggest you hurry it up!

Yolie.

Jez! wow I was expecting it but not quite that blunt! My dear you gotta make your chapters longer. CSNY? That deserves mentioning--howe--anyways I'm getting right on the next chapter.

Ah memento mori! sweet latin. I'm liking this so far--that woman behind the desk is rather creepy. Ekkies. Anyways--cool beans..good job.

hm cute--thats gotta suck--royally.

puahahahahahahaawesome story! i lurve this!!cant wait to read the next chapter!

plunkie

This is a grand story! Sorry I didn't review until now. I just updated Into the Void,so feel free to check it out.

another good long chapter, but it could use more details, anyway keep up the great work. Till next time.

waterhealer

huh, I haven't been here awile. good capter so far. keep writing. Till next time

waterhealer