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Fabricated Reality 2009-01-24 . chapter 3
I think it's going a little too fast. You could have spread the events out to be much longer.

Also, while I said I won't pick on you for it, that was before I knew Abie was actually going to have an allergic reaction. I think that might be a little too much - it's probably best to leave it at a serious case of sniffles.
Fabricated Reality 2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Apart from that 'allergy' and 'psychological' don't go together, I think it's an interesting idea :) And I'll let it slip since I don't think you're going off accuracy.

It's a nice change from 'girl in boy boarding school'.
Stiller-Nacht 2006-06-18 . chapter 4
HAHAHA nice. Very cool I'm glad you liked my story I hope to update soon. Thanks!
Lady Pen 2006-06-14 . chapter 4
Three words: Absolutely freakin' brilliant. Need I say more? No, I didn't think so! But I am hooked. The plot is original and that is something very hard to find. Not to mention the fact that the chapters all have witty names. I really, really, really like this you. You'd best update soon or your gonna have somebody throwing...rubber gloves at you ;) Just joshing. Anwyho, I'm going to go know...but for sure keep up the great work!~Lady Pen
FFNeko 2006-06-10 . chapter 4
Yay! Good chapter. Update it soon please!!

~FFNeko
FFNeko 2006-06-10 . chapter 3
That was a surprise. That was funny though, ripping off her, I mean his, towel like that. How embaressing!

~FFNeko
yummiecreamy 2006-06-08 . chapter 4
Great Story! Really love it! Kinda reminds me of Hana-Kimi...

Anyway, keep up the good work!

btw, thanks for reviewing my fic!
shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 . chapter 4
Ah much longer..much better. Anyways this is getting good--developing more of a plot--needs more detail in some places but all in all..its good--I'm looking foward to an update...so I suggest you hurry it up!

Yolie.
shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 . chapter 3
Jez! wow I was expecting it but not quite that blunt! My dear you gotta make your chapters longer. CSNY? That deserves mentioning--howe--anyways I'm getting right on the next chapter.
shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 . chapter 2
Ah memento mori! sweet latin. I'm liking this so far--that woman behind the desk is rather creepy. Ekkies. Anyways--cool beans..good job.
shaken and stirred 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
hm cute--thats gotta suck--royally.
anonymous pickle eater 2006-06-07 . chapter 4
puahahahahahahaawesome story! i lurve this!!cant wait to read the next chapter!

plunkie
Melissa Norvell 2006-06-06 . chapter 4
This is a grand story! Sorry I didn't review until now. I just updated Into the Void,so feel free to check it out.
Adaku 2006-06-03 . chapter 4
another good long chapter, but it could use more details, anyway keep up the great work. Till next time.

waterhealer
Adaku 2006-06-03 . chapter 3
huh, I haven't been here awile. good capter so far. keep writing. Till next time

waterhealer
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