Fantastic. Loved the play on words. That really took me on a trip.

Interesting imagery and idea.

Oh, my... this gave me a feeling of quiet yet tense darkness upon a rolling ship. Beautiful. New entry in my favorites.

Keep writing; you have beautiful talent.

D Maranwe Telrunya

Dark, chilling, and extraordinary. Beautiful rhythm, dark descriptions. Speechless. :) Bravo!

This is good. Sinister and chilling, it really made me shiver a little. I love the line 'Only dead men tell no tales, save for morbid fairy tales'. Its a well written poem, nice pace and wonderful imagry :)

Wonderful. I caught myself swaying along to the rhythm (however odd that may be). I love the enchantment and mystery about this piece. Keep writing!

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- Lacey

'Only dead men tell no tales, save for morbid fairy tales'. Lovely, is a strange twisted sort of way.

Peace out, kenzie

Very good. Like Edgar Allen Poe, but more... gruesome, I suppose. Very wicked. I really liked this.

Daze

Very dark, dreary, gruesome, and wicked. In short, it's awesome. You rock. I like the imagery... I find myself imagining the Reaper standing in the night under the full moon, his scythe reflecting it's light and his black cloak waving in the wind. At least, that's what your poem made me think of. Well done! (PS: Sorry for copping out and reviewing your poem instead of your stories... You have my personal promise that I'll read and review them.)

i like it very reminiscent of an edgar allen poe type writting... the repeating line i thought was very creative. your way with words is very impressive. you really do a good job portraying what is ment to the reader.

i think that this poem or song as it was looking like could be added on too still; but only another verse to give it more concluscion.

anyways overall a very well written piece of work. its good to see someone using that style still.

im nt sure i understand it - but im nt a particularly perceptive person... I reeli like it though. reeli cool imagery nd stuff - atmospheric

Mystical with a morbid tone. You're one of the few poets on this site who know how to rhyme well (I don't claim to be one of them). I think I just hit gold.

"Only dead men tell no tales, save for morbid fairy tales." lovely. The poem kind of reminded me of vampires. Eh... maybe it's just me? Sort of like dark love mixed with anger. Oh... that's like a disaster waiting to happen. It kind of makes me think: dun, dun, dun.

Very good poem :)