I like this.. I dont think it's your best though.. it was very angry, which took away from some of the poeticness.. but it was still good.. I love the third to last line

hmm i like the strong emotions beating throughout this piece...angst at it's most raw state..my one suggestion might be to change "forever" in "Despair is the ray of forever obscurity that wraps around god's hands" to "eternal"...it seems to flow better that way meaning-wise, but maybe you had a specific motive behind choosing 'forever' over 'eternal'? that said, i enjoyed reading this. do keep writing :D

A very powerful poem. Good work.