wow ... this is really beautiful. seriously dead pretty and heartfelt.

i aint offended by your review - you're a fantastic writer, and i am honored to have a review by you! one thousand thank yous for the review, i swear, it's gonna help me improve a hell of a lot :)

I loved this. I really, really loved this. It's so well-written.

wow, i adore the title, just beautiful.

this poem reminds me of summer. i love it.

Beautiful. I specifically love the last two lines.

i'm sorry.. i think i didn't return your review on vanillasupernovas :X

your use of alliteration here is awesome, and the rhyming of season & reason is great.

i don't really know how to review short poems well.. so i hope this is good enough. (:

Beautiful poem. This reminds me of when my sister left for college. Yes, the poem Grace wrote from Joan of Arcadia was an inspiration, second to my own experince with a certian someone which also prodded me to write such a poem. I understand, though, I have reported abuse on pieces posted here on fp as well. But I have to say I am glad to find another JOA fan on this site. :) Again, amazing piece. The colors are bold and rich, your words fresh. Keep writing, s.

The all the alliteration in this, works beautifully with the whole hot sun imagery. Kind of a nostalgic almost defeated air to this poem, great job well done x

this is great. the title really suits the poem.(& i think you're a god now. i didn't think anyone would figure that 'broken' was a little about Kurt, and .yes. it was... not all of it, but it was. i was thinking of him as i wrote it, and coincidentally, i was listening to lithium as i wrote it... so... wonderful job figuring that out...)

What I really like about this poem is the beauty in your language. It'd be so easy to be blunt, but I guess that's what makes poetry poetry. I like how you connect summer with changes, very cool idea. Oh, and congratulations!