Ii (i times ten, times twenty, times... you know what I want to say, right? -do they cut up your reviews here as well as on f f . net ? I wonder)Exams are over so I finally have the time to read this...I tend to try and place something like this. I wonder if the unemotional one might be Kai (some things would suit him but other things...) When the eagle dropped by I had to think of Spirit, Stallion of the Cilmarillion (again the same problem as I had with Kai- who is the dragon?) And then...then I thought of you, Kana... But, again, I found it difficult to place things...I guess I shouldn't be looking for connections, certainly not if they're aren't...I don't know anymore, just people (creatures I cannot tell) I do not know perhaps.

But that aside, I really liked it! ^_^Lhune

"The cruel reality tears at me...I live in dreams. Because there I can be free." A beautiful, wistful little peice with which I wholeheartedly emapthize. Too bad you're not expanding to tell more about the narrator's freinds and back story, why she/he is so sad and retreated into a fantasy world. You capitolized a lot of words that didn't need to be, and had a few run-on sentances, so you should probably look at the grammar in this. As far as story goes, a very impactive and enjoyable one-shot. keep right on writing. :)