|Reviews for Clutching the Railing|
| Halcyon Impulsion 7/7/06 . chapter 1
This is very thoughtful and it's filled with reasons and revelations. Favorite?
a serious breeze swings boldly/across the balcony, early morning,
| Naibz 5/20/06 . chapter 1
very beutiful. no faults in this one. great work. I enjoyed the second to last stanza. great image and. and the questioning and comparisons are superb.
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 5/20/06 . chapter 1
small and tragic. a whirl
of cigarrette smoke
off the balcony
love these images :D:D
| elasticbobaturtle 5/19/06 . chapter 1
"Where does silence sleep?
And do butterflies hate flight,
like I, shivering in this
This part has do much substance, it hit perfectly. Well done.
| Anya Mannequin 5/17/06 . chapter 1
gorgeous. completely gorgeous. i love "and do butterflies hate flight, like i"amd "last night i lost every thought of you. i felt small and tragic."this is really great
| breezy nostrils 5/17/06 . chapter 1
interesting. you know what, you're one of the few writers that makes me think when i read your comments. Faithless Juliet being the other one. anyway, as usual powerful usage of physical and visual imagery. keep on going!
| chaos called creation 5/16/06 . chapter 1
This one is insanely vivid and so well put together. love!
| Aquafied 5/16/06 . chapter 1
Where does silence sleep?And do butterflies hate flight,-ugh, just ugh. so beautiful it is almost revolting
so curving and spite. makes my eyes water
| Margot Tenenbaum 5/16/06 . chapter 1
this is wonderful.i love the imagery!