This is very thoughtful and it's filled with reasons and revelations. Favorite?

a serious breeze swings boldly/across the balcony, early morning,

very beutiful. no faults in this one. great work. I enjoyed the second to last stanza. great image and. and the questioning and comparisons are superb.

small and tragic. a whirl

of cigarrette smoke

off the balcony

love these images :D:D

"Where does silence sleep?

And do butterflies hate flight,

like I, shivering in this

dreamsky moment."

This part has do much substance, it hit perfectly. Well done.

gorgeous. completely gorgeous. i love "and do butterflies hate flight, like i"amd "last night i lost every thought of you. i felt small and tragic."this is really great

interesting. you know what, you're one of the few writers that makes me think when i read your comments. Faithless Juliet being the other one. anyway, as usual powerful usage of physical and visual imagery. keep on going!

This one is insanely vivid and so well put together. love!

Where does silence sleep?And do butterflies hate flight,-ugh, just ugh. so beautiful it is almost revolting

so curving and spite. makes my eyes water

this is wonderful.i love the imagery!