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| Ultimate Schuyler 2006-05-18 ch 1,  | abuse^-^ Seems cool. Some weird word choice, I think, but seems cool all the same. |
| Spike von Stitchdolly 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseIt seems abstract, which is a quality you will see often in haikus, I have found. It seems that people cannot get direct thoughts into a certain number of syllables, though this abstract one comes across as something you might want to jot down and remember. I commend you, the words are sugar on the tongue when read aloud, and do not stumble like harshly pressed ones. |
| girl 2006-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abusescary, but very very true. nice job! |