good, very good even, i like the way it applies to life so well, but i think it was a little repetitive for my personal taste. i liked it though

Ending was my favorite part of the poem. "I’m on top of the world" and then "I fell off" hmm... quite symbolic? Liked this, sort of a funny and disappointed feeling at the same time, like you finally got ot the top, but you want to come down, or someone's pushing you off.

Great poem