|Reviews for Suburban|
| no.peace.los.angeles 7/7/07 . chapter 1
Very clever poem. And very true, as you stated in the poem. Love it. Great work. Keep writing! :)
| in a jar pk 10/4/06 . chapter 1
loveloveLOVE it. xx
| Pricilla Grey 5/19/06 . chapter 1
Clever structure, clever poem.
- Pricilla Grey
| wildwolffree17 5/16/06 . chapter 1
Says a lot with few words. Well done.
| burning in effigy 5/16/06 . chapter 1
The beginning and ending were nice (liked how the poem could be reda with or without the words in the parentheses)
| Jezsh 5/16/06 . chapter 1
clever formatting! I like it!