This is so beautiful.

well written and nicely done but i'm afraid i find the subject horrably stupid. not all people are sinners. and we have no need to repent

Oh... interesting take on this."After all, that’s what they put on after they became ashamed/Not even Eden is a symbol of purity anymore" like the intensity of this.

Love the honesty in this poem, angry and confused. Great job!

P.S. About the Barney song, it took me a few minutes to get that...never thought of that that way. Interesting... ot sent me giggling. Haha.. :)

I like how you mixed all of these concepts for life (wishing on a star, strategies ex.) and then paired it with religion which is the same damn thing. Wishing via praying, the strategy is how many souls you can save - like if you hit the allotted number you move right past GO and collect $200 dollars.

I have to say that I love your title for this. Adam and Eve, such posers, such preps - if anything Adam's got his lettermen's and Eve's the head cheerleader. Give me real people to look up to! Loved it, keep up the good work bad boy!

Much love,Juliet.