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| Femme de Dieu 2006-06-11 ch 1,   | Interesting formatting... "lessions learned"-- good turn of word. |
| Dragons Willow 2006-05-17 ch 1, | interesting . . . not like ur normal stuff, but its short sweet simple and to the point! me like . . . need work on spelling tho . . .~(@_@)~ |
| sunshineofyourlife 2006-05-17 ch 1, | how cute. i love the style/format. great job! keep it up! :) --Sunshine |
| Mienaku 2006-05-16 ch 1, | I love how you made the poem fall like rain! Loved the play on words you used! |
| Cloudsinthesky 2006-05-16 ch 1, | I like this, the last line makes the poem shine in all it's rain drop wetness. Good job. |