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| Your little sis 8/18/08 . chapter 2
Yeah. I wrote two chapters for this. do you know where the other one went? it was weird, but i loved it, and i can't find it anywhere...
I still love my character, silver...
| Bob 5/31/06 . chapter 2
Tis iz reely baad and anoying its hard 2 reed cuz uf baad puntation and now neu pargraffs plzthanx fix
| Bob 5/31/06 . chapter 3
gits reely cunfyouzing and soundz lyke its rushd w-o commos and new paragraffs win othar peopel r talkingplzthanx fix so i can reed it correktly
| Jasmine 5/30/06 . chapter 1
| Jasmine 5/17/06 . chapter 1
Just one question...are they in canada? Because if you look it up in a dictionary, the "yah" you are speaking of is actually "yeah." unless you're in canada. Or minnisota. like...Think of how Mrs...oh what's her name...not Justin's mom, not mrs. vickery...that other one...starts with "h"...can't think of it. it'll probably come to me later...And you mention Love Train twice at the end. did you mean to do that? Since this isn't writingforums, i'll shut up now.
| criti-sized 5/17/06 . chapter 1
So what's going to happen next, I was wondering. I just hope you update the next chapter.