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Dove 2006-09-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseWell...I know whom this was about, but I don't know if that makes me feel any better. You do make cheating sound...exciting….which sends a prickle down my spin. I know, I know, a poets imagination. "You get me hot, baby. I'll pin you down with my little thighs"...That's some imagination you've got there.
poetic abortion 2006-07-13 ch 1,	abuseThe more I read the more I like it. "Oh, you ethereal fuck, stop stroking me with your eyes" - Yum. Jesus, you make adultery such a beatifully erotic thing. Loveit. So, adding to my favs. So. ~* Noelle
viotch 2006-06-28 ch 1,	abuseohmy this is absolutely brilliant. you took the adultery topic and made it sound so alluring and morbid at the same time. Never cherishing, / merely revels.this is wonderful. the superficiality of their relationship, if you can call it that. The blankets / barely cover me / and my shame.great use of words.. how very apt. A kiss / to worship / on my temple.and this too. man, you're good. I won't tell / if you won't.perfect ending to this poem. this is going into the faves (:
smile persephone 2006-06-26 ch 1,	abuse"Oh,/you ethereal fuck,/stop stroking me/with your eyes." Those lines. Those lines stole me away. I'm adding this to my favs for that. The imagery of this poem is striking. The more I read this, the more I love it. Adultery. Such a poetic subject when you write it like you did. Yum.
Countess Chocula 2006-05-20 ch 1,	abuseAs I've said before, you amaze me. You really do. You have such a talent for conveying emotions. I honestly envy you. Amazing poem.
lackluster 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abusethis is lovely. the feelings are so raw and real and the references absolutely exotic. sexy.
brents rose 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseheck yes!!
in a jar pk 2006-05-17 ch 1,	abuseout of all your pieces, for some reason, this is my favrit. i dunno. maybe i'm just a pervert! ;) excellent job.

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