So true, so true. Although i wondered what the hell a hemet was until i read the review ;-) Nice style to this poem, very light and cheery, just what i needed so thanks button nose

“When the world gives you stress,/Trying to make your life a mess,/Throw on your party dress./And you’re heading for success” - Loved the light and airiness of this, it’s hopeful, optimistic, and fun to read. You’re conveying sad times but with the style you’ve made it very flirty and entertaining. I loved the party dress analogy, and the end about the helmet; I guess when it comes down to it life really is that simple. Valuable advice. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

Hey tis a really great poem, it was very entertaing to read and like your other review said is very truekeep up the great work*hugs*The Distant Flame aka Beahumut

i found this very entertaining. and very true too. :)