GREAT WORK...! is very very powerfull...so sad...so angry i like a lot this piece keep writing...

This world is (In State Of Agony)

i like how you had the poem rhyme the whole time. very originally but you can never beat classical writng. my favorite lines were I killed you

so you couldn’t get in my head

I killed you

your gun became my best friend

So now Dear Johnny

I put you to rest

I think I can move on

just had to get this off my chest

nice !

My ex-boyfriends name was Johnny so this poem is awesome b/c he broke up with me b/c he thought he was rebound when I really loved him *tear* and it was Valentines Day... anyways GREAT POEM!

A love letter gone wrong...how deliciously dark. The dripping of tasteful crimson and the bafflement of such sweet words. Your poem was glorious in words.

Wow, this is very expressive. I liked the lines you wrote. Just to let you know it's going in my favorite stories.