What? Perfect story. Every story should end leaving us clueless, yet knowledgable. You do that so well.

SWEET!! FRICKIN SWEET!

Please tell me we meet her in Dragons or When in Rome? Please? *puppy-eyes* i want to know more about her.

:D CD

Another great looking story! Ill have to follow this one! :)

that is so awesome!!

I like where this is going. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next ;)~Canith

lol...I like the way you use trenchcoats in this story. She's kind of afraid to wear one, then he shows up in one. Very symbolic.

Unless you're trying for some kind of effect, I would say to vary the paragraph openers a little. You have ten paragraphs in a row beginning with "she."

Interesting open ending. It was a neat little journey you recorded here.