I like the idea behind this, the connection to Odysseus, and the imagery of walking through a city and an ocean. Wonderful as always.

*love*

good job. lo me gusta mucho.

Neat. Funny. Kinda sad. I liked it. Sorry I couldn't grow a review with more meat on it, but my brain has been sucked dry.

Nice. I especially like the allusions to The Oddesy. Poem love!

it's good, but i really only liked the second half. it's true.

.yumyumyum. *drools* muststealone. bye! see ya sometime!

I really like this. The idea that maybe God needs someplace to crash, that he's lonely being absolute. Everyone needs something to fall back on, right? I like the imagery here (as always), and the different look at what religion might mean.

Sweet. Funny. Kind. I'd write a more coherent review, but it's very late and I'm very tired.

Exactly. Headaches are of the dark gods, slamming into your skull with their chisels and hammers of thought, and distorting your mind with their static and twisted being.

Beautiful imagery. I love how you use language, mixing literal reality and metaphor all in one go to create a wondrous idea/image. *squee*

Wonderful. Your carefully choosen words remind me of water.. they remind me of my own writing, or rather, how I wish to write. I love them all.

I love it Batman. I like the rhythm of the poem, and the ideas behind it. Beautiful language, and eerily wonderful concepts.

hm.. i could agree with your idea.. i like the metaphors here.

'tis very pretty.i like it. the wateriness. science 'n' magic. blah. g'nightCoSaCo

Again, loving the imagery. And it is so true, when you try to do something, you get sidetracked completely.

I love the imagery in this (you always give me the most wonderfull images :) ). I especially like the section about the moles, and the angels dancing. Very nice Batman.