| Reviews for A Scrapbook of Autumn |
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ThisCut-UpAngel 5/18/06 . chapter 1"I bought a twelve-pack of monthsThe other far I've only used September.I'll add the other ones to my scrapebook in time." Very creative and almost nostalgic..Well-done! |
Lirael1 5/17/06 . chapter 1This poem made me smile. It shows a very keen insight with skillful pacing so that you lead the leader along until it all comes together at the close. Pleasing the mind. :) |
chocohound 5/17/06 . chapter 1I liked this poem a lot. The concept of remembering a month instead of a certain time was unique, but I liked it. Septmeber wwouldn't be the month I'd choose to remember, but there are lots of other months I should do t hat to. My favorite lines were:"When time comes looking for its lost parts" and, Time is oblivious.I don’t think it could take an entire year back,Even if you hid it out in the open Or under the parlor rug." As well as the idea of buying a twelve pack of months. This is going on my favorites! |