God, this is so true. Especially the last few sentences:

"How she hated those butterflies. Yet secretly, she loved it when they were awake inside of her, making her feel so alive."

This is the part I liked the best. Good job.

No words can actually describe this short story but, Brilliant. It captures the emotions perfectly, which it should (*ahem*). I give it the five thumbs up.

This was short, but good! Hey maybe check out my stories if you want. I like urs!