|Reviews for aphrodisiac laden|
| Tyndall Blue 6/23/06 . chapter 1
if only they were...the last line definitely made me chuckle...when i read the first line it was to the rhythm of "black sheep black sheep"
| poetic abortion 6/12/06 . chapter 1
itissocute. why can't life be as sweet?
| breezy nostrils 6/7/06 . chapter 1
lol calorie free. if only real sugar was calorie free. keep on going!
| beulah-land 6/5/06 . chapter 1
| simpleplan13 5/30/06 . chapter 1
lol.. I love that last line.. so perfect and the format in the first line is great too.. awesome piece
| B. M. Reed 5/29/06 . chapter 1
haha the last line is funny ] cute poem!
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 5/27/06 . chapter 1
amazing...just amazing imagery and choice of words and ... just wicked
| frayedlifeforce 5/23/06 . chapter 1
i love the last line. it symbolised so much for me...it has so much strong emotion and imagery and it is just beautiful.
| having reached closure 5/22/06 . chapter 1
ah gorgeous, im in love with the last line :)
| multiples of six 5/21/06 . chapter 1
This poem is so short but it still manages to get across the feeling. I love the "my my my" and the last line. Nicely done )
| beti213 5/21/06 . chapter 1
haha you GOT it. the words that so many people meant to say but couldn't find. the only odd part about it was the word "estranged." somehow, it doesn't seem to fit.
| bread and circuses 5/21/06 . chapter 1
Heh, I read the first line the same way astral boy did. I love it.
That is all.
| X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 5/20/06 . chapter 1
Wow, loved this poem, it's so... I can't explain it. Wonderful poem!
| account not in use 5/19/06 . chapter 1
made me laugh-a little-because it strikes me as alittletoperfect.
but then, that's how poetry should be.
| a lonely september 5/18/06 . chapter 1
i love this! i love the feel of it, the taste of it, the 'why aren't you calorie free?'. . . it's just life. meloves.