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Susie Mango 2006-06-23 . chapter 1
if only they were...the last line definitely made me chuckle...when i read the first line it was to the rhythm of "black sheep black sheep"
poetic abortion 2006-06-12 . chapter 1
itissocute. why can't life be as sweet?

~* Noelle
breezy nostrils 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
lol calorie free. if only real sugar was calorie free. keep on going!
beulah-land 2006-06-05 . chapter 1
lovely.
simpleplan13 2006-05-30 . chapter 1
lol.. I love that last line.. so perfect and the format in the first line is great too.. awesome piece
B. M. Reed 2006-05-29 . chapter 1
haha the last line is funny =] cute poem!
The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
amazing...just amazing imagery and choice of words and ... just wicked
frayedlifeforce 2006-05-23 . chapter 1
i love the last line. it symbolised so much for me...it has so much strong emotion and imagery and it is just beautiful.
faking closure 2006-05-22 . chapter 1
ah gorgeous, im in love with the last line :)

-naomi
multiples of six 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
This poem is so short but it still manages to get across the feeling. I love the "my my my" and the last line. Nicely done =)
beti213 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
haha you GOT it. the words that so many people meant to say but couldn't find. the only odd part about it was the word "estranged." somehow, it doesn't seem to fit.
bread and circuses 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Heh, I read the first line the same way astral boy did. I love it.

That is all.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-05-20 . chapter 1
Wow, loved this poem, it's so... I can't explain it. Wonderful poem!
account not in use 2006-05-19 . chapter 1
made me laugh-a little-because it strikes me as alittletoperfect.

but then, that's how poetry should be.

a lonely september 2006-05-18 . chapter 1
i love this! i love the feel of it, the taste of it, the 'why aren't you calorie free?'. . . it's just life. meloves.
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