Crazy longwinded comparison. I dig it. The style's sort of slow and melencholy. You go through the paces sort of painstakingly...but it makes the work interesting. Thourough, but with a nice point. You don't try and cram any other bits in. Relatable, clever, cool formatting. I like fuchsia.

An interesting poem that brings up a valid point. However, I think it could use a little more development of the idea. As is, it seems a little... lacking in passion. But good technically.