 The Best 2007-04-24 . chapter 6 Worlds Beyond Our Own
*reads first bio* Yurkimuro Meiyo
Why do i have a feeling that this is going to be lame? *hopes he is wrong*
Nikkou, the little **, already hitting on him.
hm, Girls do have that power. Poor guy, some thing from his past will probably come up and she'll in jerpardy and then he will save her and life will be happily ever after. *sighs* how architype.
It wasnt as bad as i thought it would be
Rose Alwyn.
HEY SHE WENT TO CANDA WITH A RY! how orginal. hee hee, i like her, better than that blind samuri loser, who gives this one girl to much power.
aw, poor thug with the achie balls. What a **. It will be fun for the men!*is entirely ripping this to shreads on acciedent* I dont mean to be a prick really! Hmm i like it. it is cool.
Alastor Black
Wow. I dont think you put enough emphises on the falling in love. i would have loved that story. Damn. I wanted the angel to reply ** YOU BLACK, you greedy **. i'll never tell you how to break the curse. and i like the immortality part. *shakes his head at the grace* Angel is to nice. He doesnt deserve her. as for the story, i liked it. Not your best, but still good.
Vampire Boy. OH joys. *only really likes Judas as a vampire* but hey, lets see if you peek my interst.
t'was ok. mystical beast are only fun when they, you know, are mystical. They were perfectly normal people, aside from the not liking sun and walking fast. Chris may be a little more observent than most guys, i mean who really notices if some one is breathing, but still. No cool running from crosses, or being immortal.
Idiot Jon, and not so Idiot Jenelle.
sorry, jon just doesnt turn it on from the start, which i found lame. i mean very him, but lame.
*blinks*
we had that conversation. We definatly had something like it. Deja'vu much!
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*is done* *wins* *is one of your best boyfriends ever past present (duh) and future.* |
 Derick Mateo 2006-05-18 . chapter 2i really really like this.
i find your use of a flat-tonal voice actually quite useful, seeing as the piece is quite witty.
the beginning sounds like an offshoot of novels like...(even though i only saw the movie, dn didnt read the novel its in this style) memoirs of a geisha. however, seeing as you pointed out she becomes a sex slave...lol. that may make sense.
very well written, you're going to get a 100. |