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| grey spirit 2006-05-20 ch 1,  | abuseJust curious (I've only looked at a couple of your works) but do you not use punctuation generally? I mean, this still manages to flow well, but I'm wondering. Anyways, the last two lines I'd say are the strong point of this poem. |