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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-13 ch 1,  | abuseGreat format! |
| simpleplan13 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abusewell done.. I really love the italics and the ending |
| diamondtearsandstormyeyes 2006-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww... i love it! and, u, i think, are one of the most awesome people i have ever seen or heard of... you like simple plan! |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseThe formatting is so great on this poem. I have to say that your skill for telling a story in a poem is awesome! ~te he!! :) |
| les petits bateaux 2006-05-22 ch 1, | abuseAmazing, this was simply beautiful. Your formatting was right on target, and you didn't outdo yourself. Well done. -trinity |
| the shadow in the mirror 2006-05-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this one more than the last, it is very mechanical to read, because of the set up, but I like that. the first part is beautifully described. |
| eden is burning 2006-05-21 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful poem. Well written and well formatted, individual... It was just great. Thank you for the lovely review. You made me smile =) x x x x |
| kimmy 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg you are so good at poems that one was so nice i loved it so much |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseAhh I love it. I love how you spaced out some words and the italitcs and all. And the last stanza was my aboslute favorite. I love love love it. I just can't even like say which part I love best because so much of it was all so incredible. I love the first two stanzas and the last stanza. Bravo. The title fit in really well here. |
| i want an accunt 2006-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseSIMPLE PLAN ROCKS!so does this poem |
| putz-6 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI like this it's different but neat. Also thank-you for the review ^_^ |
| Ahemait 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abusedifferent style, but i like it, espcaily with the italics and when you wrote this t h i s. good job! |
| frayedlifeforce 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWHOA. this is beautiful, amazing, just fantastic. I'm sorry, i'm gushing, but i really love this. the last verse especially was very well expressed. i love this so much, i'm adding it to my favourites. |