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Reviews For: Puppet Strings
OutKastPoet 2006-11-15 . chapter 1
I like the beats of the poem, it definietly has a certain rhythm to it. The words forced me to read it a certain way, very interesting.
ode to a firefly 2006-06-18 . chapter 1
This poem flows very naturally and rhymes very well. Lovely!

♥Christine
the nonexistant 2006-05-25 . chapter 1
...I like this. Nice work. Keep up the good work.
shadowriter55 2006-05-18 . chapter 1
'your mind will never be your friend'

I like.
D.L. Elizabeth 2006-05-17 . chapter 1
Nice metaphor. Good word-play. Well done!
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