This is very good. I loved the word choice and descriptions. Very beautiful.

Finally! A romance fic with an actual Grim Reaper! I cannot begin to tell you how happy I am to have found this! I swear, it's like people are afraid to write a story with romance between a girl and a real bonified grim reaper. Aha. All punny jokes aside, I want to thank you for writing this story. It looks to have a good, intriguing beginning. I greatly look forward to seeing how this turns out. Please update again soon!

UPDATE.

I have to admit, I didn't quite get this story. Your writing is good, and yet very vague at the same time... but do please continue. Maybe I'll figure it out once a couple more chapters have been added lol.

This was really good! I just think it could use a little revision here and there; but that'd be minor.

Well done!

O I like this story, Update Damnit!

this is reeli gd! please continue - original!

Oh...wow! I love it!Very awesome...

I love it! It's got a wonderful start, you should continue with it. I love the death aspect...(as dumb as that sounds) it's very well portrayed.

I liked it.. Im kinda frazzled right now so i didn't get it completely.. lols! i'll read it again later when my mind isn't haywire.. but you should definately keep going!

thank you for commenting my story! it was a very helpful comment!

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please dont tease me with that "review and i'll post more" stuff! finish! lol it's very good so far. it grabs your attention. very good cliffhanger. enough so that the reader can understand, but not enough so that she is satisfied. i love it

HA! That was awesome. I like the tension up until the end-I was just expecting for the grandmother to die, but you added a nice twist. Very nice. Please do post more- I absolutely love Grim Reaper stories! It's hard to find them here...

i don't exactly understand...Monica can see the Grim Reaper? And she will die in three days?

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Oh My God.

I love it.

Keep going. PLEASE!

Wow, hon, that was... Jeeze. It was great. It was, dare I say it, perfect. I think that is one of the best things I've read here or anywhere else. I loved it. Really well done.