I didnt really get the myth reference a footnote at the end explaining the ppl in the title might be hekpful.. I still liked the poem a lot though... the whole shapping & jewlery thing was awesome.. great piece

this is ohsopretty. i love the way that it's written and i love the last four lines especially. i love how this has a nice little referencedsomething or another... yes, i dont know how to speak right now. but it's interesting. and this is good. (god i suck at reviewing).

wah, i love how you used 'my metallic icicle heart'. the last line really, was well put. great job!

keep writing!

beautiful work. 'you were very dear and ohsonear/to my metallic icicle heart'those lines were ended on a really strong note too,brilliant.

There are so many pretty lines sprinkled throughout this piece. My favorite of all has to be "and i remember how you used to touch the morning snowflakes at sunrise." Very sweet.

I also like the way you formatted -accessory- to look like a bracelet. Nice job on this. :) *