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| Violet Marx 2006-11-25 ch 1,  | abusea great poem about laughter-love or a strong friendship. great job! |
| Audrey Rose 2006-07-23 ch 1, | abuseTouching and gorgeous. Enough said. |
| laughing in her sleep 2006-07-03 ch 1, | abuseaw this is soo sweet! it totally made me want to cry (maybe thats not saying much, im kinda emotional and girly like that lol) great job of portraying the many years of friendship. keep writing! |
| Looking 4 faith 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is an amazing poem. Its so moving. Your friend is lucky to have you I'm sure. |
| ode to a firefly 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseI don't even know what to say. *sniff* This is awesome. You are awesome. *HUGE hugs* =D ~Christine~ |
| coal and marigolds 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseYou kept me reading until the end (which is rare as I'm about the most easily distracted person ever). This seems so wonderfully genuine. I can tell that it's important to you. Really lovely. |
| bleed on the inside 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseoh, this is brilliant. bloody brilliant. very beautiful. i can tell that it is very close to your heart & it's just a very nice piece. tons of raw emotion, good feeling & it flows well. definitely going on my favs. |
| FiVe-MiLe-GrAcE 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet! It makes me want to smile yet cry at the same time. Wonderful job! |
| mercury.love 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI hardly ever like long poems, but I loved this. This explains a friendship really well. Incredibly sweet and wonderful. It made me really sad because it made me remember how incredibly soon I'm going to be leaving my friends... but everyone goes through it. Great poem, keep writing! |
| laughter at the funeral 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abusesomehow, you have defied its quite exhaustive length by keeping it interesting up til the end...youre great... truly yours... |
| boys kiss girls 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseI liked the guitar and drum part and how it was sold out because you would never let anyone see anyway. This is a really sweet poem. Kudos to you for keeping it interesting. (Or maybe I'm just desperate enough to keep reading.) |
| Damien Vlashtov 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abuseInteresting poem. I like how refreshing it feels, straight from the head. Too many people try to make things 'sound cool' and lose any substance to their writing. You've captured some good substance - excellent job with that. |
| azn aquarian 2006-05-17 ch 1, | abusewow. this is heaps sweet. really good =) |