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SonOfPhoenix 2009-11-19 . chapter 1
Beautiful poem, its strange how sometime we choose the comfort of a lie over the discomfort of the truth. Well written
RawrEllieMayMightBeADinosaur 2009-06-20 . chapter 1
Ouch. It's really relatable, I like that in a poem. It was raw emotion, her need for his attention is almost heartbreaking.

It could have been a tad more powerful, could have had some better word choice. It could have had a lot of things, but it didn't, & that's part of the reason I liked it so much. Even though that's a little backward. I like things that are missing just a little something, it keeps you on your toes trying to figure out what it is. Keeps you up at night, you know?

-Love from the RM, link's on my page.
kyox88 2009-05-21 . chapter 1
oh the line lie to me tonight is so damn sexy and powerful! i can feel the feelings all over the poem~~nice one!
bran4ever 2009-04-23 . chapter 1
Beautiful. What does love unrequited love mean? To hear them say they love you too, if only for one night... This is truly beautiful. It's so hopeless in nature that you can't read it and not feel something. Personally, I pity the narrator and wonder what will happen in the morning.

It was wonderful.
Psychotic-Benevolence 2008-12-22 . chapter 1
the worst lies always taste the sweetest.
Renate Seline Zaz 2008-09-03 . chapter 1
ooh...so sad and moving...
Kaleidoscope23 2008-01-07 . chapter 1
I really like this poem..I think many people, including myself, can relate to it. Very nice!
XsilentXescapeX 2007-09-14 . chapter 1
nice, very nice.

~silent
anything-but-perfect 2007-06-07 . chapter 1
*legasp* That was so good! It made me 'aw' at the end.
Ashelin 2007-03-01 . chapter 1
I know...I just know. Great job.
moonsliver86 2006-12-07 . chapter 1
normally, i don't like poems that rhyme... but i'd have to make an exception for this one... the rhyming just made the poem better and more expressive... excellent work...
The Dripping Pen 2006-11-28 . chapter 1
Very well done. I really relate with this poem.
gema123 2006-09-20 . chapter 1
wow...this poem made me feel all tingly i like it...thanks for the review, i'll read that poem when it gets up there!
Kaelefay 2006-09-04 . chapter 1
LOVE IT. Simply no other words...
Let It Rain 2006-08-28 . chapter 1
I really like this! It gets a bit repetitive, but the idea was expressed really well. Keep writing!
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