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| kendralyn 2008-09-03 ch 1,  | abuseooh...so sad and moving... |
| Kaleidoscope23 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem..I think many people, including myself, can relate to it. Very nice! |
| XsilentXescapeX 2007-09-14 ch 1, | abusenice, very nice. ~silent |
| anything-but-perfect 2007-06-07 ch 1, | abuse*legasp* That was so good! It made me 'aw' at the end. |
| Ashelin 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseI know...I just know. Great job. |
| moonsliver86 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abusenormally, i don't like poems that rhyme... but i'd have to make an exception for this one... the rhyming just made the poem better and more expressive... excellent work... |
| The Dripping Pen 2006-11-28 ch 1, | abuseVery well done. I really relate with this poem. |
| gema123 2006-09-20 ch 1, | abusewow...this poem made me feel all tingly i like it...thanks for the review, i'll read that poem when it gets up there! |
| Kaelefay 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT. Simply no other words... |
| Let It Rain 2006-08-28 ch 1, | abuseI really like this! It gets a bit repetitive, but the idea was expressed really well. Keep writing! |
| UndiscoveredLiterati 2006-07-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. I enjoyed it! |
| Lilac Ebony 2006-06-26 ch 1, | abuseA very heart felt poem. It makes me think of a broken romance but for one night everything may seem alright. Thank you very much for your reviews. |
| Tragic Bliss 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abusei really like this... onto my favorites it goes! |
| Bonfire Of The Sanities 2006-05-30 ch 1, | abuseBut only for tonight, I just need the lies. Absolutely BRILLIANT!I ove this...very,very nicely done! |
| Lyra Alluse 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is...simply breathtaking. It gave me chills when I read it. It reminds me of my second relationship. My boyfriend stayed to make me happy. Never a good set up. When he left I guess it might have been easier to hear the lies. Anyway, it has a lot of depth and I love the rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work! ^^ I love your style. |