Oh, this is so beautiful! I don't know how I could've missed it before. I love scene poetry like this, where you tell of the scene going on, but we see your emotions, also. Not to mention I'm partial to the moon and rain. Anyways, it's short and simple, but wonderful. I especially love the lines "Moonlight rain was the only thing we ever drank" and "Stole each others breaths with forbidden kisses"

Magnificent! Keep it up...well, I know you will.

Much love...TinuvielDork

I guess that you mean we did this instead of dance? Not sure, too highbrow for me I guess. If you want we can trade off some more R&R, if you review one of my works thats a yes.

Reminds me a bit of the book Romeo and Juliet, a classic, but still, the line: "Stole each others breaths with forbidden kisses" sounds just like their forbidden love. Wonderful, exquisite images. Beautiful work. Good luck with graduation and stuff! :)

I loved the imagery of drinking the rain, and sharing air; beautiful and evocative.

Much love,Juliet.