aw. bug. *pokes the government*

this is a lot better than some of your other stories - it shows how you've evolved as a writer.

Just Durandal chiming in again on your fab conspiracy story again ah. Those damn cliffhangers! You're really killing me with these. Can't wait to see what will happen next. It's getting better and better with each installment imo.

You seem to be pretty knowledgeable about 9/11 conspiracy theories judging from your live journal, and I hope you use your info to give the rest of the story the appropriate flavor. Very envious of your ability to be concise and to the point with all of your stories. In short (unlike the rest of this review!): Keep it up duder.

I definately like what you've whipped up so far duder. Is this going to be an alien conspiracy, a 911 conspiracy, or hopefully both? I agree with the other reviewer that this is definately a progression in your writing abilities. I still want to hunting aliens over the metagene in the year 2003 with 2,0 channels on my direct tv though. Where in the hell is my flying car?!! Can't wait for more.

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this is really good! it's better than your old stuff - all that media has improved your dialogue - and your characters already have very defined personalities. i really like what you've done so far.