I like this story, I'm excited to see where it's going to go. Please continue it/ update it soon!

~Cherice :)

I like Aguilar, he must be amazingly good at seeing the good in others. I don't know anyone who could put up with someone as emotionless as Cassidy.

I'm using my amazing ESP powers to send you musey vibes. Write more. Please?? ^_^

Oh! I like this xD;
Emotionless characters are always fun... would love to see more of Cassidy's dreams and hopes

Generally I lurk around but I felt like reviewing. Great start and I love Cassidy's character.

I liked the little blurb about Cassidy's past in the first chapter but I can't help but feel that more happened to him in the ten years that passed. Hopefully more will be revealed in the third chapter *nudge nudge*

Hmm..the only problem I noticed, very slight, is that you might want to mention immideately that the "he" at the beginning of chapter two is not Cassidy. Other than that...not much else

interesting start - but slightly confusion because of the lack of background info on Cassidy (but this is usually the case in the beginning of stories). update soon - i'd like to see where this is going. --promiscuous--

YAY!Second chapter done!And it was good. It took me a moment to realize Kingsley wasn't in the room and that the doctor wasn't Cassidy, but I got it.

Good part! It kinda seems like there's tension between the cheif Aquilar and Cassidy... or at least maybe there's a little too much interest on Aguilar's side... or that's just me being hopeful...

^_^It's really good for the first part. Short, but good. The description was nice, good vague elaboration on what was happening in the past and why he was so doomed.^_^

(Update Act1 *cough cough*)

so far looks really promising.

0.o I got something dedicated to me! Anyways, the part I like most about this chapter is actually the explaination of the desk. Out of everything in the room, that desk is permanatly in my mind forever.

Interesting. I would like to see more. :D