Very poetic, beautifully written. Keep it up!
~Music

Good poem. Good luck with poetry and life. Have a brilliant day.

~Twilight Starr~

How can you call your poetry shabby?This is so wellwritten. LOVE IT!!:) -Katy

that one little moment right before you wake and you smile because you think it's all real...

...and then you open your eyes

Very good!! I love this view that you portray of dreams, you personnify them nicely. The flow and wording in general is great. Good job