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| youzi 2006-05-18 ch 1,  | abusei like the energy of this piece...the vivid sounds, "hiss and roar" and the images of "dark smoke"...all these kept closely to the whole idea of machinery and made the piece very focused :D do keep writing! P.s. is 'spectial' supposed to mean a spectral object or a specter? |