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| AmericanWriter2008 2006-05-19 ch 1,  | abuseThat is really good. Excellent job. |
| Lily Steele 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseNice, I like it, and very profound. Only a few nitpicky things; you spelled again "agian" and unravel "unravle", but other than that, it was a rather good write. Keep up the good work, and good luck. |