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| Esquirella 2006-10-06 ch 1,  | abuseVery interesting ending here. |
| virginia giselle 2006-07-04 ch 1, | abuseAnother astonishing work. Please pursue publication. You're too good to not get paid for this. I'd buy your books, even if I read them already. ^_^ |
| Sakru angelqueen 2006-06-10 ch 1, | abuseHow scary huh? I would never want someone to watch my house like that so sad... |
| SerialXLain 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI feel sorry for both of them. London reminds me so much of my friend Jack...It's crazy. I loved this but reading it in the commons with everyone being loud was not good. I was constantly screaming for people to shut up. ARGH! Love xooxoxoxoxox |
| KageNeko 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseAww...i like itits cute..in a staulkerinsh way...which is what it actually is...but yeah..its kool^^ |
| multiples of six 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI love your one-shots. It's not that I don't like your chaptered stuff, but the short stories are really good. Like here.. we know that Grace is a little psycho, but you still make him completely sympathetic, which makes the ending just tragic. And yeah... |
| Japeth Bordon 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseI believe that you should create a longer version of this. More details. Nice writing. |
| Rhapsody's Shadow 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseWow that was dark and creepy it a twofer. I love your style -Rhapsody of the Shadows |
| Lucifer's Sonata 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know I've been nearing the line of liking stalkers and forced lovers, and it's kinda scaring me ^^;; BUT this piece was cleverly designed!! I mean, i can't say I've ever been a fan of justifying rape or even the idea of someone forcefully initiating sexual intercourse while the other partner eventually begins to consent, ONLY because of how easy it is to for some people to relay that into reality ^^;; BUT this work that you've created has yet again made me just a bit more interested in the inner minds of people like Grace. Oh, great names btw!! ^^ Well, i'm guessing this is a one-shot?? if not, great! and if it is, then it's one of the better ended one-shots i've ever read!! great job!! |
| kamma7292 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was so wonderful, I really liked it a lot. |
| xanthofile 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abusea boy named grace. and london. all londons turn out to be bastards, he should have known. (my prejudice, yes) i was captivated until the end. there's not much more i can say, other than that...it was a hella good read. not sure if i'd call this angst or tragedy. *shrugs* eh well, it fits well enough. very excellant work, my friend! |