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| With Rhyme and Reason 2006-07-21 ch 1,   | Very light and whimsical. I like how the persona interprets the leaves as both threatening and beautiful. There's some nice punning in the title... both "Laughing Leaves" as in "the leaves which are laughing" and also "Laughing Leaves" as in "Laughing Departs." There's the nice threatening feel again. Nice job on this. Quite refreshing. (Thanks for reviewing "Virgo." I was experimenting with sentence breaks... looks like someone noticed. :) Thanks again.) J |
| PocoSnow15 2006-05-19 ch 1, | Very nice! I liked your idea of leaves laughing. Great job! |