Reviews for Past and Future - FictionPress.com

shola 2006-07-21 ch 1,	abuseYou obviously worked ** this one, it's really hard to make something like this work without making it look really contrived or something. It does work here. It's very sharp and very tight, excellent flow and you don't over elaborate, so you don't take from the bare message in bold. One of your best I think
Aslan Israel 2006-05-19 ch 1,	abusewow. It's just brilliant how you worked all that in there. Good advice, too.
feelingshortofstable 2006-05-18 ch 1,	abuseThat was beyond beautiful. A word of thanks must be extended to both you and your friend for such subtle and unoppressive wisdom. For the least offensive and subjective warning I have yet to see, I thank you for the inspiration.
Amalia Jagd 2006-05-18 ch 1,	abusei so agree (with the bolder words at least). i had a hard time concentrating on the poem because the words were bolded.